is this poem any good??

My eyes are longing to see your face my lips are calling for your taste my fingers need to feel your skin I feel I am burning from with in, please come and put this fire out befor I die and this love fizzles out.

Answer #1

I think it’s pretty good. it’s also a good idea or refference to go back to in the future. just keep all your poetry because eventually you’ll go back to it and make more ideas with the ones you already have.

…sry if I wrote too much…

Answer #2

yea its gd… =]]]

Answer #3

it’s short but it’s cute. nice! :)

Answer #4

it’s short, sweet and passionate. Good job!

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