Is this a good poem?

Agreed,On second thought showing her the poem wouldnt be a good idea. She might take it harshly.

Wow. You need to work some things out. Several things. First, always check your spelling. Simple things like a misspelled word really makes the poem look bad. Next, I agree, do not show your mom this. This isn’t really all that bad, pretty deep, but not bad. But, your mom would probably freak if you showed her that. Keep your head up through all that you’re going through.

yo 4real that got to me deep I feel you on the mom thing I know exactly how you feel I went thru the same thing with my mom.its something that will always b with you 4 the rst of yo life never leaving you alone until you accept thr truth and face your fears

This is pretty deep.It captures a lot of those dark emotions you feel. It sounds like youve been through a lot with her,maybe shes unawar of the pain she’s caused. Id sit down and tell her these things that bother you.Maybe even show her this poem.