Is this a good start to a song?

Letters to the living

If I was able to tell you everything you should know Maybe you wouldn’t hate me so And we could move on My thoughts I wouldn’t act upon Nobody here is wrong This is just another song I will write this/and forget where I have been/learn to live/without you again

Getting together my thoughts run crazy in free form

Answer #1

well I dont have any experience with music but that is okay

Answer #2

it is a good start . Are you in the music bussiness?

Answer #3

..no comment..gdLuck though..,with your song..tell us if u’re done..

Answer #4

It’s cool. I like the “ this is just another song “ part.

Answer #5

I like it, I write for my band and I think that this is pretty nifty : ) goodluck with your writing

Answer #6

I think you could leave out the part this is just another song because duh we know that but other than that it’s pretty good

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