is this a good poem.. what naads fixed

What does love deserve…?

A big DREAM wedding with the bride dressed up as if she were a geisha (and perhaps is)? Well of course the first few periods of love, so precious and infantile, should be given its kick to maturity by a large love honoring wedding…. Right?

Wouldn’t a small personal exchange of vows be perfect for love, this blind ultra-forgiving, un-materialistic felling? This could be the perfect stepping stone for a long life of passion and friendship, Or at least a few years of happiness.

Does love even deserve anything?

Can’t it thrive on its self with out even a breath of FRESH air? Like how a mother loves her child even before it is born for no statistical reason, just because love is.

Who even would give everything to love.…? I mean it’s just a feeling.

Ill tell you who__ the exact person that kisses away my wrong, and tells me I am perfect and have the strength to do any thing. This is the person that has dedicated their life to love... to their love…… me!!!