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Is My Poem Any Good?

Is my Poem Any Good? Be TruthFull Please

Take my hand and follow me to that place I long to be. Take my hand and trust my way, in that place forever stay. Follow me toward the sand; we’ll run and play, hand in hand. Take my heart and hold it true; forever I’ll stay close to you. Seize my words and listen well, then forever I will tell. Release your heart and feelings too, just as I will do for you. Trust your heart and follow me, to that place we long to be.

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Answer #1

awh(: its sweet & romantic(:

Answer #2

Thanks I got inspires to write it by a beautiful young lady

Answer #3

that’s cute holdenw, wish all guys were as romantic as you :(

sending all the aussie beer drinking / big belly guts guys your way so you can sweeten them up for us ;)

Answer #4

thats really good

Answer #5

Thanks a lot, and send them packing my way lol don’t forget to add me or fun mail me

Answer #6

yes! Its totally good, and im not even all that into poems! Keep up the good work :)

Answer #7

If you guys want read more just fun mail me

Answer #8

I like it. Keep up the good work.

Answer #9

awww thats so sweet and nice

from vampirezoe101

Answer #10

better than a lot of the stuff people post on here ahaha

Answer #11

hmm I’ve heard that one before lol jk its really good!!! and sweet

Answer #12

OMG so mushy and lovey dovey but its beautiful :)

Answer #13

Thanks lol

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