Is my poem any good?

I really like your poem, I write poetry 2 it sounds like a lot of the stuff I write. keep writting your good

If you want an honest opinion..I think it’s pretty weak. I’ve heard and read things like this many of times. I suggest being more descriptive maybe using some similes or metaphors.

is that how you really feel?? it just describe so many of my emotion perfectly!!! kinda hit a nerve there, but I’m touchy lately, made me cry!!! keep writing, and if this is how you feel, you can always fun mail me or camment or anything!!! love to here from you xx

two thumbs up!! :) so is this something you like to do writting poems because this poem rocked!! I liked it and I dont think it sucked!! :)

wow, you are amazing!! I loved it!! psh, girls love it when guys write poetry so be thankful you have such an amazing talent!!!

aw thanks :)

Pretty dam bored lol.

terrorincognita, I guess your the weakest link here. But thanks for the advice anyways :P

thanks all for the complements, And to answer some of the questions up there, I feel like that yeah. I’ll continue to write more and post them :)

love the words ,do you truley feel like that? xxxhunixxx

omg1! that is really good! how bored were you in math class?

its fabulous, I can relate on this poem, its absolutely nice, oh im in deep emotion. I surely like it. good job!

wow!! I like it. good job =D

amazing

I like it yes :)

that was good:)

it’s cool man keep up the good work

Strange, My poem was supposed to be in “music” now it’s in this category…

Your a natural kid, keep it up! Its a lot like mine that I write!

I really like the peom. But you need better self esteem about your self.

whoa. I like it!