Is it advisable I keep this poem?

I don’t usually write in this style (I’m a rhymer at best). Would you advise that I continue experimenting in non-rhyming pieces? Do I have what it takes?

I left To tread upon a path I had no intent to remain on

Walked an empty back road And happened upon a scenic view During an hour in which Perfection sought Life

So beautiful… My muse embraced And traveled To fetch my soul

Breathless Of the way the shadows reached Lost and mesmerized A delicate feature caught my eye: The bird who flew the sun away

And I thought I could write a poem here

~kaff~

Answer #1

Everone can write poems :) So just keep practicing and try some different themes and you could get really good at it

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