I do not exist...hope you like it..

I do not exist

I do not exist, I do not breath, I do not bleed I do not hurt I do not exist in your eyes,

not anymore, I am far, far away, like the stars that don’t exist, but still they shine and you can see them far away,

but there not alive, there not really there. Yes I am not there, not for you, I do not want your pity.

I do not want my broken smile painted in your thoughts.

I do not exist, I am not there, do not look for me , I do not exist, I am not there, I am not there

Answer #1

Hi xxjulixx, thanks for your compliment, I know, I do write happy poems, I been writing for a while now. Heres one you might like…

God bless thanks

Beautiful soul

The wilderness is her getaway; out of civilization, away from pollutes and stress, lives free like a soul without sin, like butterflies and fairies; she dresses

soft, with color and textures of silk and pastel. She can be spotted from a distance, her moves like flying fairies captures the eye. When she needs rest; she strips down

to pure nudeness, she lays on the fresh grass; becoming the essences of a frame. She falls asleep like a Goddess princes, she becomes meaningful to every creatures sight. The young

pigeons come and gather petals and cover her nakedness beauty. She walks away leaving her unforgotten image in the eyes of one.

Answer #2

I like. It’s unique and different from what I’d see in a poetry book. And that’s good. It’s so much more different from other poems and I think that’s great. Seems you’ve been through a lot. As have I, I can sorta relate to this poem. Yet you should make one of more happiness. It would create a beautiful image for those who read. Think about it, if you can write a poem that is dark and gloomy then if you were to write one of happiness you’d be bright. And it would be transformed by the fact of your experience.

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