How to re word this sentence so it make sense?

What would you do if you know that you were doing a big presentation for a client today and you left all your notes/materials at home?

I would talk to the manager about the problem, call up the client and see if the presentation could be delayed or be able to reschedule the appointment for an hour later present later in the day, then I would go home to collect the notes & materials and ensure that I do not leave them at home in the future.

^^ I have been staring at my answer to the above question for well over an hour now, trying to figure out how to re word it so it makes more sense, it just does not seem right. It’s really making me mad & Im fed up with the stupid thing. gahh!

Answer #1

How about:

I would talk to the manager about the problem, then call up the client to see if the presentation can be delayed or rescheduled to a later time. I would then go home and collect the notes and materials and pack them to ensure that I do not leave them at home for the future presentation.

or:

I would talk to the manager about the problem, then call up the client to see if the presentation can be delayed or rescheduled to a later time. I would then go home to collect the notes and materials and ensure that I do not leave them at home in the future.

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