How to move forward with this story?

I glance at her picture as the cold black rose petals drift their way across the lifeless grass. The wind grabs my numb body with an awakening chill. What he did to her. No one saw it coming.

This is my start. I wanna portay the idea of abusive releationships between people. How do I go about now???

Answer #1

He was mentally unstable and made her kill herself by his physical and mental abuse towards her.

Answer #2

Depends on what exactly happened next in the story. Did he kill her? Did she become mentally unstable? etc.

Answer #3

this is confusing and sadd

Answer #4

Do you have any idea in what you want the story to be about? Because you need a central theme e.g. “This story is about two lovers committing killing themselves”. Then you need to decide the order, e.g. “First they meet unexpectedly, then they fall in love. Then their parents find out and don’t like it. Then one takes his life because he cannot take it. When she finds out she also kills herself because she thinks it’s useless to live without him.”

After all of this you can continue your story. Hope I helped!

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