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This is something I just kinda came up with. I haven’t really looked over it, but I just needed to write about it, I needed to get this out of my head. How is it?

I’m the one you want. No, not her. Not the girl next to my side. Look up. Look at me, really, truly, look at me. Sparkling eyes, full, pink lips, blonde hair. I’m the one you want, not her. She has disappeared, she has left you. She doesn’t want you, she’s not worth it. I am. Nobody needs to know the truth; I want you, you’re worth the world to me. I ♥ you. And I want you to say it, admit it, You ♥ me too.

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Answer #1

Do you think I should slip it into his locker? Lol I won’t put my name on it, but he’s kinda depressed that nobody likes him and I think it might make him feel better?

Answer #2

I like it (:

Answer #3

a little out there blunt…but surprisingly good! way to go liberty!

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