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How many of you have been in this similar situation??

The only thing that’s going through my head as we walk alone down the dark roads is how much I love you and want to be with you. But still the guilt is to much for me to bear so I tell you to chose. You say you don’t know you tell me I have a slim chance but that you still love me and want to be with me too. I don’t know what to believe anymore. So until you choose I’ve decided to cut off all emotion until the final burst of pain knocks me into the deepest depths of my mind.

p.s this is one of my first poems and I would like to know if you guys like it or if it hits close to home

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Answer #1

well, I said it before but ill say it again… I love it! and it fits right into my situation..or at least did… I wrote a poem too but its not very good and not nearly as deep…

I don’t wanna wake up every day, With you so far away, I just want everything to be better. I only want you to be with me, If only you could see, That we could always be together. If not by body than just mind, One heart and soul combined, And things could change forever. Some day I want to be there, I want you to prepare, Because that question is now or never. It’s really a weird thought I guess, I know you wont say yes, My words would float away like a feather. My thought will be gone from your head, I might as well be dead, I am just washed away with the weather.

what do you think?

Answer #2

thank you. I’ve done a few similar poems but this is one of my favorites

Answer #3

I love the last sentence (:

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