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How is this poem, good or rotten :) ?
I made this poem or created it whatever you call it but it describes the relationship with my boyfriend and I wondered if its any good and if I should keep it or bin it :) ??? P.s sorry its quite long :) xx
Babe I had to write this because I know that you’re the one, You keep me safe through the night and guide my day with light just like the burning sun, When we first met, I thought nothing of you, just another one of those stuck up kids, another nasty one. But then you flashed a smile at me my senses overthrown, I couldn’t believe you were looking at me I thought I wasn’t known. As the days passed by and our friendship grew stronger I was slowly falling in love with you and all the nights seemed longer. I was filled with joy for registration at the thought of seeing you but what was about to happen I wish I only knew. After that our friendship was rocky, difficult to work out but through some sort of fate, it all sorted out. Again or friendship grew and again I fell in love but this time it was equal this time you fell too and somehow I knew we were going to pull through. A year passed and were still going, our love ever growing, and now I know your what I need to live and everything I have I give, just for you in hope you stay, with me through my life and guiding me by day.
give it to him I think its good but if he hinks its ba dhe will still apreciate the effort (psother then me most guys suck a t poetry they won`t know if its good anyway :P)
Thanks for answeringg xx <3 Muchly Appreciated :)
9/10boys dont get poetry but he will know its means you love him. sum parts are good :D
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