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your more then a friend, more like a best friend. we’ve been through so much together, the pain the laughter. but through it all were still here, holding onto what we have and what we’ve made, to look back and see how far we’ve come its more then a dream its a everlasting thing. our memories together will never fade, the joy your bring to me, and the heartache you take away, its more then what I can say, its an amazing feeling to have a friend like you always there when the skys are blue, and when the tears are rolling down my face your always there to whipe them away. you take my hand and ill take yours and together we can make more memories then before. together forever, till the end, we will always stay best friends.

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Answer #1

thankyou all (:

Answer #2

That is so sweet I don’t even no where 2 start!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥ I love the part that says, “You take my hand and I’ll take yours and together we’ll make more memories then before.” I lllooovvveee♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ this poem! :) :) :) :)

Answer #3

This is a really good poem:)

Answer #4

I love your poem it is so true about friends and that is coolio!!!:)

Answer #5

that’s amazing you have talent!

Answer #6

its really, really good. its great.

Answer #7

I like it

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