Is this a good query/cover letter for a movie script?

If you guys don’t know a cover letter is what you send to producers and production companies before sending a real script in, just to give ‘em a taste of what the movie is about. This is mine so tell me if it’s good please:

My name is Megan. I’ll keep this short and sweet. My script is titled “My Friend Justin”. It is a concise, 64 page Drama about Justin Shark, who is a complete loser in high school. Life changes as he becomes a highly famous and talented musician after high school. The movie has a series of flashbacks to his school days and forwards to the present day, ten years later. Significantly, Justin’s high school reunion adds a twist. The movie is designed to put a real perspective on how we are in high school, and how much we change over the years to come.

Answer #1

im going to be 100% honest. it sounds like a good story but people are getting sick of high school movies. Maybe try to come up with something a little more captivating. Find something that will not only capture the audience but have them thinking about it for a while

Answer #2

Thanks! My second script I’m working on is completely different! :)

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