How do you feel about this poem

When I use to live wit my auntie my uncle use to cheat on her and she never left him this is a poem I wrote long time ago tell me if you like it honest opinion

It takes a strong women

It takes strong woman To be in love with a man When she knows he’s not treating her right

It takes a strong woman To not confront her man When he didn’t come home last night

It takes a strong woman To close her eyes And not see what is in front of her face

It takes a strong woman To keep up her man’s lies When another woman is taking her place

It takes a strong woman To sacrifice her own happiness Just to make her house a home

It takes a strong woman To live with a cheating man Instead of living alone

Answer #1

ITS amazin!! because its all kinda true!!! and its 2 do wiv your own experiences!!! I lv it!!! 80)

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Answer #2

Wickid. I love it. Its honest and open with a lovely lyrical quality. Well done :)

Answer #3

thanks for all the commenting its crazy to see different perspectives on my poem its seems like guys see this woman as weak but in all reality this is a very strong woman you have to really put your self in her shoes to really understand how strong this woman really is just think about it for a minute its very easy to say this womans weak just think if this was your mother before commenting thanks

Answer #4

wow this is really really good!!

Answer #5

I like it it is so true.

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