Hey is this a good finished song?

They say that home is where the heart is But my heart is lost somewhere at home If my hearts at home I need to find it I need to find it Come help me find it!

(chorus 1) Always a day The skies a lonely, dead grey in my mind, my hope and my pride my lifes being empteed poured out like rain into a river of rushing black tides

and so we search together again I finally see theres noway to pretend I spill out my heart whats bottled inside and it goes something like this

(chorus 1)

with sympathy in your eyes you close you arms tighty around me and say

(chorus 2) Always a day seems a loney, dead grey but the light is inside your mind, your hope, and your pride so pour out yourself and let your heart decide youre a rainbow of bright colored skies

(chorus 1)

(chorus 2)

the end

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Answer #1

its kinda slower- not really slow tho. but its not like goth or emo sounding… thats not my style:-)

Answer #2

lol is there a way to put it up on here?

Answer #3

I like it ! but empteed is spelled emptied ahah

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