Do you like my song?

Heres a song I wrote I would like to peoples opinion this is from my “lyrics book” I call it if some people like this ill post another one its really hard for me to put this up here because of how shy I am but here it is read it be4 I change my mind

Don’t forget I love you(title)

Baby you hold a special place in my heart dont Forget that ever honey honey because ill never stop Lovin you your the reason I get up every morning Yea yea baby

Dont forget that I love your eyes,those playful Beautiful light hazel eyes yea they give me Butterflies oh yea yea I can see your playful In your eyes ohhh yea

Baby dont forget how you make me smile, How you blush, how you make me laugh, Because I could never forget how you make me Feel I hope I make you feel the same way And baby pleaseee dont forget I love you

Dont forget that I love your laugh, that silly Little laugh you have… Baby you have a Good heart and a nice soul your Personality shines… I can hear It all in your laugh oh yea eh eh

Baby dont forget how you make me smile, How you make me blush, how you make Me laugh, because I could never forget how You make me feel I hope I make you Feel the same way, and baby pleaseee Dont forget I love you

Dont forget that I love your voice, that velvet Comforting voice thats makes me faint… Baby I know youll nver hurt me I can Feel it all in your voice oh yea

Ohh baby dont forget how you make me smile, Everything about you makes me wanna smile! Ohhh I dont know whyhyhyhy maybe its because You give me butterflies, or maybe its because I know you willl never hurt me ohh your loyal, Your faithful, your beautiful, I can trust you…

Baby just dont forget I love you for you

Answer #1

it sounds awesome and no offense sketchy but im not sure id want you singing it or another female singer I also think a guy singer wouldn’t nail the performance at all

Answer #2

as i read it, i came up wid de melody in my head! i wanna hear your song if u have a video or recording of it. i can tell ur musically talented. so am i. if u want u can check out my youtube. go to http://funadvice.com/r/15t45mokj0u

hope to hear ur song! good luck!

-Sandy

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