Guys, I am writing for nanowrimo. How does this story sound?

Waking in dream. Seems simple, right?

Kaitlyn has always been a dreamer, walking on air her whole life. But now, she realizes the things that she loves most, are also the ones that are after her.

This is no Freddy Kruger story. This is much, much worse.

Kaitlyn is now being chased by demons. Horrific demons, that are waiting for the chance to pounce.

Believing your heart isn’t always the best. And following your dreams-

Just might kill you.

Answer #1

“Waking in dream. Seems simple, right?” ….. wrong, I don’t really know what you hope to convey by this.

“… This is no Freddy Kruger story. This is much, much worse. …” ….. well, good luck to you, if you aspire to surpass one of the most successful horror series of all time, but I think that you will be struggling to succeed.

Sorry, but the outline you have posted does not even have a thread of a storyline that I can assess in order to suggest whether it might be worth pursuing.

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