what do you guys think of the lyrics to a new song im working on?

please let me know what you guys think :) broken down….i still look up to you. shattered….i still believe…in you. believe that you are my only hope.. i know out of all the people in this wild crowd….your eyes are the brightest… out of all the people i see….your the one that shines through my heart. just a thought of you lifts me up when im weak….. if i saw a shooting star in the night sky tonight….i wouldn’t hesitate… in one breath….id wish…for you. <3 this is where it begins….or is this where it ends?…. will i ever see you again?…. have we been torn apart forever?…..will i ever hear your voice again?….will you stay awake with me for just one more night?… without you…im cold. theres only one thing….that can change me….change me for the better…. its you <3….only you <3

thinking back….i always knew the truth. never spoke it… you always told me you where smart…and wise.

im laying underneath the stars tonight….staring into space… can someone please tell me why the stars are forming into your face…? staring down at me…with that smile that destroys me…. i close my eyes….and yet…all i see….is you….only you <3

just the thought makes me sick to my stomach…. knowing i hurt you….hurts me the most… are we meant to be?…how come we cant be together?….is it wrong? maybe it is wrong…..but in my heart…its the farthest thing from wrong <3 im not afraid of loving you……no matter what happens <3 i don’t care of its wrong….if its twisted….theres nothing in the world that bring me to where you can….you can….only you can..only you <3