Falling Into The Hands Of Shame

The blood on your hands Stains your very existence, The shame in your eyes Shows your hiding something, I will break you, make you fall Show you your nothing special.

Answer #1

gawd, that was rilly lame. so what if she doesnt agree with what you say. what if shes not christian or catholic? your so predjudiced(andyburton)

Answer #2

He knows it’s eating, it’s chewing me up It’s not right for young lungs to be coughing up blood And it’s all It’s all in my hands And its all up the walls

Answer #3

your a rilly good writer. I wish I had skills like that because you write so poetic and smooth…♥♥♥

Answer #4

interesting. . . Are you writing a song?

Answer #5

that was very deep! seriuosly =]

Answer #6

ohkay, once again, nothing towards god. if you know man or even woman they try to be bigger and better than everyone, my poem is just saying that eventually what shame they aare hiding will come out and everyone will know how big they really are. and thanks rhinestone_bullets, im not catholic or christian, I believe in no god. I do not have a religion, its just a bunch of bull, and if I did pick a religion then the other ones would bash me for not believeing the same thing.

Answer #7

wow, jonzy2020… I like that. awesome, im speechless!

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