Does this make sense?

‘She had been pricked on her finger by a spindle on her 16th birthday, and there from had fallen into a deep sleep.’

Answer #1

Yes, it does make sense, and it is grammatically correct, although it is hard to read. It does make the passage more interesting, though.

Answer #2

Well, it makes sense, but it’s a grammatical mess.

‘She had fallen into a deep sleep after she was pricked on the finger by a spindle on her sixteenth birthday.’

Answer #3

smithmax, are you on drugs?

That’s far from grammatically correct!

Answer #4

Oh… Sleeping Beauty…

Answer #5

yeah :]

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