do yu like ma rhyme??

heres the rhyme I wrote people tell me if its good or not

Baby you picked me up just to let me down And now I’m so broken Look at the sh^it I’m tokin Hit after hit This chronic is the sh^it I’m letting Mary jane take away the pain Da^m my girl never lets me down Drifting on memories Living for the past Trying to get my mind of your bi^tch as$ So il just keep hitting this blunt Till I can’t take it no mo And hopefully your having fun With that stupid hoe

Answer #1

Its pretty good! lol, where’s all the Dank at??

Answer #2

no not really it is horible dude or should I say dudet because I am horible at that so I am a dudet and so you must be one

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