Do you like this song?

I think it’s a very rough copy and could use some work - but that’s how all songs start out. Just keep working on it.

I think its good but some of the lyrics need a little work. but its still great

I think it needs more work , but it’s still really good. Great songs can take days to write…I know I attempt to write :p

Needs some work still, but I think your off to a good start.

I really hope you don’t take this as an insult :) I just wanted to see what I could do w/ it your version is much better, but I thought I’d try :P

How do I make it through the darkness Stop standing in the shadows, find light Stop crying despite

Do you see the misery I’m in? To see my world go still No hope of starting over again I want to vanish, drift away Dont want to go on another day With these visions running through my mind I’m losing the control I really never had I’ve left it all behind

Falling down, fast And I cant catch hold Im losing to myself I knew it wouldn’t last It’s slowly taking over me Like a plauge I can’t believe before I couldn’t see I was falling, now I’ve fell

How do I escape THIS life? Not life all together I take a second look Without any fears Dont know where to turn But fall into tears

I need to go the other way Stand up and say… This is real I can’t keep running away Got to do what’s right Which is what I feel

Falling down, fast And I cant catch hold Im losing to myself I knew it wouldn’t last It’s slowly taking over me Like a plauge I can’t believe before I couldn’t see I was falling, now I’ve fell

Im trying to hold back, not scream Wont let it come out of me I’m so awake, but still asleep From my life… Irunaway
I can’t breathe it seems

Chorus(x2)

How to I abide? I don’t want to hide!