Do you like my sons Haiku

Silent Snowflakes Fall Nothing Grows Until Warm Spring Very Cold Outside My son is 6.5. What do you think?

Answer #1

good except it has to be all about nature lol

Answer #2

he’s only six?! I’m fifteen and can’t write anything like that lol it’s truly very good considering how young he is.

Answer #3

It is WONDERFUL! You can be very proud of him (and still - as I just wrote to you - love your daughter, and the new baby.

Answer #4

It’s actually pretty good. Haikus are a seemingly simple form of poetry because they’re so short but with their constrictions of the 5, 7, 5 syllable stanzas it makes it all that much more difficult to convey a sense of anything really. You should encourage him to write more and grow as a poet or writer!

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