Are my poems any good?

Are my poems any good?

(shattered) Like glass my heart shattered I hit the floor As you brought me down some more It hurts so bad and got me so mad But yet at the same time I was so sad My feeling were mixed up They were eating me alive And all it kept doing was causing hate and deprive As if you were god you controlled me I felt as if I kept kneeling But how could you have so much power over all of my feelings Can’t eat no sleep Your on my mind your all I can see I just need to be free But since I met you I no that can’t be

   (it will never come true)

Beauty its true If you haven’t seen her you hadent got a clue She has the body of a godess And a face that is modess I drive myself crazy knowing that shell never be my baby I wish I never met her Because I’m just trying to forget her The pain worstens each day When I look into her eyes it goes away I want to tell her how I feel and do my part But I’m scared she’ll just end up breakin my heart If that happens that’s the end Because I can’t live without her I’m better off just dead

(devil in desiges) Your looks are the best they can be But the inside of you is as dark as the sea But my eyes take the best of me Because I love what I see But my feelings tell me otherwise It shows me the otherside The side that I try to ignore But it gets bigger to where I can’t take it any more So what should I do Do I stay or do I leave you I just can’t get you out of my mind out of my body out of my touch I just can’t seem to get enough But how do I through away somthing so perfect I guess I can’t your beauty is just so worth it

        (if she was mines)

If she was mines I would treat her like one of a kind I would buy her the finest And my love for her would be the highest I would never hurt her or make her cry Because I no without her I will die She’s like my heart and more If she left me I would hit the floor So I want you to no that I will keep you forever So please do the same so that I could live Forever

             (if it came true)

If it happnened if it came true If the girl you always wanted was right in front of you If she said all you wanted to hear And she said it o so clear Would you take your chance with her Or be to scared of how it might end When she says the word that will make you bend The words that will crush you inside and cause hate and deprive The words that will upset you and make you want to die The words that will just break you down inside But who knows maybe it won’t end that way But that for you to decid Is she the best thing for you Or the worst thing that will destroy you

            (loving hate)

When somone ask me what is love I say its ethier the best or the worst Thing as my reply It will be the best thing that will make it seem as if you can fly Untill you find your wings are tempary and you come falling out the sky It will make you the happiest person alive Untill you find your happinest can go as easy as it comes by You may say you never felt this way before and she’s all you ever Wanted Untill later you find that you meant nothing You may see the movies with the fairy tale endings But I think its just hell pending You may say she’s not the same But it is all just a game So what is love you might ask Just anthor faithless act