A song I wrote?

It’s called Seconds V1 Do you know how I feel? You never took the time to get to know me Every time I speak you turn around And talk to someone else I can’t deal With this

Chorus Will you just shut up for one second! And let me say what I have to The seconds are ticking by I open my mouth and you just keep chatting away The seconds seem longer then they should So I’ll just walk away

V2 I start a sentence And you interrupt Don’t you ever shut your mouth? Maybe you should start I can’t speak my mind! Because you won’t let me say a single word! (Chorus)

Ending Just please shut up Before I kill you!

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Answer #1

I think it good dont listen to them they just mad cause they cant sing keep writing more

Answer #2

I actually did like it! I do agree that it needs some more work but this is on it’s way to a really good song!

Answer #3

not all that much sorry, it needs a little rhyming it doesn’t sound all that great sorry…

Answer #4

thats true you should never put unpromoted lyrics online.

Answer #5

someone could steal this never post unpromoted lyrics online. it should rhyme too… not good. sorry

Answer #6

well I wouldnt say its bad I mean just needs sum work and a lil ryhming another thing you shouldnt post it because people could steal your hard work

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