(A Joke Tell me what you think) Walmart

I don’t think this counts as a joke.

You know, hedge, you called this a joke but jokes build up and have punchlines at the end. From your last post I know that what you’re trying to do here is a stand up comic routine, which is very different from a joke. There was a comedian a long time ago - Andy Kaufmann, who could have the audience almost crying with laughter, without saying a word. For about 5 mins he just stood there and looked at them. His facial expressions were very subtle, but he had them in hysterics.

So, it’s very possible that what you wrote would make people laugh if it were performed a certain way. That is where your personal style is going to come in, and that’s what you will need to build. Take some of the best comedians in the world. Their routines would not be funny if they were written down.

So maybe youtube is your best bet. And you dont need an expensive camera. Even a webcam will do.

Don’t give up.

a friend once told me a joke kind of like this, in that it went on and on with what seemed like no point, and no punch-line. but my friend was very enthusiastic when he was telling it, and very animated.

and at the end when everyone in the room was looking at him like he was a freakin retard. he said “and I just wasted 2 minutes of your life”. and then some of the people laughed. but it still wasn’t very funny.

Yeah… I agree… the nursing home at my Wal-Mart keeps tighter reins on their senior citizens… they would never be allowed to converse with the public. I know what you mean about those cashiers as well… at our Wal-Mart they keep their children with them and they’re always asking for your change when the cashiers hand it to you.. annoying as hell…

Right on… hilarious!!!

Haha. I think it was kinda funny. I would crack up if that happened to me. Ahhh 6.

This sucks. -9999999999999999999999999999999999999999999

this is the worst joke I’ve ever heard -100

this is sooo retarted.. how is this thing funny -200

this wasn’t even a joke just a really long, boring story… 1

This was lame as hell. Please, NEVER attempt to tell a joke ever again. You suck!!!

lame… I give it a 0… :)

Is this even a joke? -4.

umm can I say -10??

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1. how is this funny?

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