All is fair in love and war ---what do you think?

People with weapons and misles and warfare Come from the ground without an ounce of knowing How they got there. Helmets and mud disguise their faces And people keep getting shot.

They charge without hesitation and Others take small steps… Low breaths… Steady breathing… Hearts moving… As they panic At the last possible moment

Each soldier is at least a little bit different. But what person isn’t? Especially when in love Although love and war are not at all fair They are both equal So in a sense They are fair… To eachother.

This was inspired by a person with a broken heart and the love of my boyfriend whose love I hope is so deep that it stays the same forever. Because there is such love. But for the record. What do you think of everything I’ve written?

Answer #1

AwSoMe!! It’s raeaLlY gOoD!! :D

Answer #2

Im a Marine not a soldier,but I think its a great poem if thats what it is.

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