My Love Poem

im making a girl I’ve just met a love poem to show her how much I love her but I cant give it her till tomorrow so I want to know if I need to change anything or is there anything I can make better - any opinion will help, thanks

heather I’ve only known you for 5 days now, when I saw you all I could say was ‘wow’, I already know your a stunning girl, you shine and sparkle like the newest pearl.

the distance between us breaks my heart, I would just love a relataionship with you to start, I know ill have a lot of competition, getting you is like an impossible mission.

your sister may not like me for loving you like I do, but I know my love for you is true, I cant help how I feel about you heather, you dont know how many dreams I’ve had of us together.

your sweet, cute and to me your perfect, I hope you and me can connect, I know now that you love another guy, hearing that almost made me cry.

maybe I dont deserve a girl like you, gorgous and fit I just know that my love for you is true, finding something bad about you, is like a test that I just cant do.

to me your a princess in disguise, and you will always be the one who wins the prize, you look amazing and your personality is spot on, all my feelings for you will never be gone.

now I just wanna say that I love you, and my love for you will always be true, im here for you and I always will be, and hopefully one day ill be next to you sitting on the sea.