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tell me your opinion on this poem. (DO NOT COPY THIS!! if you do I will take legal action on you.)I need to know if this is good enoughtto give to my boyfriend.

im not sure how I can prove my love for you or even prove to you, that it is true. but I do love you with all of my heart, I wish you could see. how much you really mean to me everyday I see your smile I know that we will last awhile. everytime I hear your heart beat. it nearly sweeps me off my feet my heart only beats for you and you are the reason, my smaile is so true. everytime we are together I can see us lasting forever and ever an everyday I see your adorable face. my heart starts to race. I love looking into your shining eyes anyday I would choose you over nay other guys you mean the world to me and you have made me the person I want to be I know there is a lot we will go through anyday, I would give my life for you when your hand is in mine I know you will keep me in line. everyday of my life, I will prove my love to you adn do everything I can to make you see that it’s true I hope we spend the rest of our lives together and make our love last forever

opinion?? comments???

also.. if you want me to write you a poem.. funmail me!!

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Answer #1

I really enjoyed it. as a guy I would love for a girl to give this to me. I think he’ll be really pleased and get closer to you emotionally (if possible I really don’t know). on a 1-10, I give it an 8 or 9. GOOD JOB.

Answer #2

now you can funmail me lol

Answer #3

your funmail is set to friends only.

Answer #4

omg this is ike so good im like awwed its so gorgeous aww I love it yooh shood def give it 2 your boyfriend.!=D

Answer #5

thats way cute! I love it a lot :) nice job :)

Answer #6

awww thats really good :]

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