I wrote this poem, what do you think...

lol ty, I get sloppy at the end of my rhymes lol, but good constructive critisism.. a lot of people come off as arrogant when they do that but you came off freindly and helpfull so ty again

It’s pretty good, but there’s a few times where the rhyme wasn’t too good and the last verse could use some work. I don’t like the way you ended all the sentences with ‘it’. If you are going to rhyme, be sure to be consistent. kat =^u^=

That poem was very touching…sad but good.All mii poems are sad aswell mainly about past experiences but urs is about present difficulties your going threw it was very good!

thank you all! this is the first poem I’ve written in a really really long time, like years and years… I write rap so thats kinda similar, but I think Imma write some more poems for all of you guys to read, I appreciate the feedback.

wow I ammm sooo like shocked. its riilly good. ugh you make me want 2 start writing again :P

your talented. you understand how much you respect life, but you also question why it can be tough at times. your family, gives you strength to keep on challenging the obstacles that you find. life can be easy rich or poor, life can be fun young or old, love can be real if you choose to believe, just like god unless you disagree.

wow that is amaxing I really like that

ty again :)