What do you think of this poem thing..?

what does the world look like. is it empty, is it a brawl. is it everything we never thought, or nothing we hoped at all.

when it rains what do you see. you see wet, you see cold. I see life and a truth, never dared to be told.

towering trees and forgiven scars, define the sounds of our souls. scared and alone with every heartbeat, and piece of flesh with too many holes.

ruthless or soft spoken, are we balanced in peace, or broken with words. ripped and torn at every crease.

where are these words taking you, what do you think. is your mind a shattering destiny, or a love that slowly shrinks.

yeah I know its kinda evil..but I don’t know, its how I feel sometimes. lemme know what you think.

Answer #1

thts gud and poetry is really tellin how you feel in a complicated form for da most part

keep it upp

Answer #2

Amazing, I don’t usually like poetry but that was really beautiful.

Answer #3

I really think you got sumthing there 4 real.lol honestly it goes hard

Answer #4

that is very good and low and behold it bloody rhymes 8)

Answer #5

Beautiful. Honestly that is realy something xx

Answer #6

very deep, I write poetry for fun. my mom taught me to express myself this way. my point is that was very good, I enjoyed the contrast in comparison.

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