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What do you think of this poem? Love/hate
Love…
Love is blind, Love is bright, Love can make you lose your sight/ Love can make you feel strange, And love can fill your heart with pain, Love can be the best emotion, Love is deep just like the ocean, Love is hard to understand, Complicating where I stand, Love can make you feel torn, Love can make you feel adored, Love can make the world seem great, The end of love can begin hate, Hate can make you feel angry, Hate can halt your understanding, Hate can make you insecure, Hate can make your love no more, Hate can take you many places, Hate can ruin many faces, Hate can make your life seem shitty, I hate my life when things are gritty, Hate can overlook the truth, Hate can make a change in you, Hate can make your days seem long, Hate can ruin great love songs, Songs can be both love and hate, Like some people you may date, Hate and love, are 2 emotions, Usually neither one is chosen, Love begins with a spark, Hate will tear that spark apart, Love will make you wear a smile, And love can hurt you for a while, Hate can make you wear a frown, Hate can turn you inside out, Love is what I long to have, Hate is what will destroy that, Love is awesome, it makes me happy, Hate makes me think life is crappy, I love love, and I hate hate, Do you think it’s odd, That I feel this way?
I always rush my poems, so any critique is welcome :)
two snaps two snapps…that was awesome
amazing!!!:]]]
lol I got to fix the line that ends in crappy too, I couldn’t think of anything at the moment and I was kind of rushing it lol, thanks for the feedback, I’m glad to hear people like my work, it inspires me to do more.
Whoa!! Dats amazing!! I always just pass up poems 2 answer but I looked @ dis one and its amazing!! lol
it was so good you’re a great writer :]
there is no critique needed that was amazing!!!
I like it!! It’s awesome!! :)
LIKE AMAZING
wow your really talented. thats an awesome poem =]
its so true
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