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What do you think of my 'Wrinkles' poem?
Wrinkles Engraved memories above his eyes Worry emotions marked between his sight Lines around his speaking mouth Laughing lines of smiling doubts A life long thought of wondering why Why is his father said goodbye A little boy watching the car drive away Wanting his dad, he wanted him to stay His father is everything he tries not to be He mended his own heart, and he wanted to see That this wasn’t his fault, not in a million years But yet this night is suffocated with tears Soon it will pass, and stand with the truth That his father left, because he loved you He didn’t want to show the mistakes he made So he watched his boy turn in a dot and fade.. ~Lea
Wooo awsome not for the kid but as poetry you rocks da world
It’s good,It Tell’s me exactly what you mean,I really like it,You should think about writing more,I would read them,Send me some more if you want, x
awww its very good :)
lol pokey24 is funny. woo awesome not for the kid lol =D yes your poems are all kind of random but always good in their own unique ways :)
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