What do you think of my song 'Family of Hope'?

I wait and listen to her sleepless night sigh Children hungry mouths, curled up on their side Waiting patiently for all eyes to close Because this is when father beats himself up the most Stomach talks while dirt slithers his arm Children sleep, a dream with no harm The night to himself, he blinks strength away Doubting himself, he’s surprised he made the day Because his heart breaks every single time That his family smiles back, and yet does not whine Cry father Cry the family man Chorus: Is it true, that men do not cry? What do you call me? What do you call me? (2x) Another day has come, and the family is still whole Myah and her smile, and her heart of gold Stomach still empty, rags cling her hips Daughter on tip toes, giving dad a kiss Her weak legs tumble from weightless weight Daddy went to fetch some water, but it was too late A proper burial, shoveling with a rock Daddy burried his daughter, hunger still mocks His heart still breaks every single time That his family smiles back, and yet does not whine Cry father Cry the family man Chorus: Is it true, that men do not cry? What do you call me? What do you call me? (2x) Dust crust his face, while looking at the grave Maybe there’s a world out there, that’s the land of the brave Looking at the sunset he knows it never ends But tomorrow and the next day, he will try agian Cry father Cry the family man Chorus: Is it true, that men do not cry? What do you call me? What do you call me? (2x)

Call me a true man (3x) (whisper) ~Lea