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What do you think of my poem I will always?
It seems one thing has been true all along You don’t know what you got till it’s gone But baby please stay with me and keep holding strong I look to the sky and ask what I’ve done wrong
You dont need to go, you shouldn’t even say goodbye Because if you go then I’ll go, we’ll both be fine We need to stay together just you and I We have to grow up, live, and die together
Now since day two I knew that it would always be you I would always need you I would always want you I would always love you
I want you to know from the bottom of my heart This poems for you Now the last thing I want to say is That I love you
am falling in love with our poems!! whats your name??
Thats Great :-), it looks like you have put a lot of thought into it!
I absolutely love it! though I think you should lose the last paragraph.. it’s already said in the underlying theme of the whole piece, writing it and repeating the word love just doesn’t work.
but that’s just me.
Great job mate! keep up the good work.
awww, I wish it was for me, lol =) you could make that a song, its really good
I think thats a pretty good poem! (: its nicely structured out, good choice of words. good work :)
9/10*Beauty:):)
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