The me inside

What you see aint what you get What may be, is not what is I am me, the one who hides In the layers, deep inside Where my dark core rests Will you be the one who tests If it still beats or if it still rests Walk the path of ice and fire In the end my soul is for hire Dire the path may seem Dont turn back, walk forward into the unseen What may be is not what is Walk the path to finally find peace In my arms, in the silent bliss For you I savor a kiss…

Answer #1

I like that. I really good!

Answer #2

that is excellent! I give it a 10. keep up the good work.

Answer #3

very nice. I like it.

Answer #4

I like it. :) good ideas, but some of the lines are off sync. (like, it doesn’t flow when you read it aloud) maybe this is just your style. for example: “where my dark core rests” other than that it’s realllyyy good. :D

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