What do you think of my love poem?

one of my few love poems lol

A Dozen Roses

A dozen roses I give to you my friend A gift that seems so small But they represent so much our friendship most of all.

A rose for the friendship a rose for the touch a rose for the trust we share our sharing means so much.

A rose for the kindness And the deep caring you show A rose for the comfort given When I’ve been feeling low.

A rose for the laughter how it makes your eyes shine a rose for the dreams we share it’s amazing how they intertwine.

A rose for the deep respect you give to me with ease a rose for the love we feel and how you wish to please.

A rose for your compassion that has helped me in so many ways a rose for bringing me sunshine that has brightened all my days.

The last rose is the best for it stands so proud and tall this rose represents you my best friend of all.

Answer #1

Very Nice !!

Answer #2

plagiarize much. what is the point of copying another persons work and trying to pass it off as your own..especially on the internet..who are you trying to impress.

Answer #3

plagiarize much. what is the point of copying another persons work and trying to pass it off as your own..especially on the internet..who are you trying to impress.

Answer #4

Very nice, but it is like watching a poorly edited movie. Keep tweaking it a bit.

Answer #5

HA …busted …you got served two examples are enough :/

Answer #6

VERY NICE!

Answer #7

she’s a real critic.

She’s right, though: this type of poem needs a meter. It’s unbearable otherwise.

Answer #8

dang… she’s a real critic.

Answer #9

The rhythm here is way off, and it’s very distracting in this type of poem. Maybe try to make it flow better?

Answer #10

YES!
this one is totally rad!! im in love with it!!! and its a HAPPY poem!!! ahhh i love it!

touche`

Answer #11

joyce regna a dozen roses.

Answer #12

…cliched.

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