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What do you think of these poems?
What do you think of these poems? Don’t have to read all of them, just want your opinions. Thanks x
Fragrant scrunch, rough comfort, green Dampening soles and souls and eyes Black magic blanket, out of reach, too deep, Smells so sweet, subtle nostalgia arise!
Times when life was so simple then Whine of wisdom, desperation to tell, Tortured and terrified, unbearable knowledge? Crisis in the vicious whirl
Pulled in once, can never return Dignity ripped, torment the mind This wishful thinking, so unkind.
Life unfolds and slashes our face All our faith dissolves without grace Despair and boredom settle in deep We laugh and cry our intelligence to keep.
Play down their world till they can’t stand the trivial Until life becomes meaningless and pain sinks in They’ll cave, you know Their pain will be so unreal Frustration torture And alienated Make them feel alone and strange Then copy them Impersonate their misery and turn it into style You culture wh*res who love to manipulate Take their meaning Put it in a song Make it meaningless They’ll hate you for it I’m happy this way Not happy in the way you think I don’t want beauty and smiles I don’t want to lock up what’s inside It’s not my head its total clarity I’ll surround myself in horror to get it Don’t take me away Don’t treat me, throw medicine in my face Let me submerge myself in the crucial values If you take away my life My love my music my knowledge I will destroy you And then I will destroy myself
them poems are fascinating im relly interested in what caused you to wright them because they are a little depressing wondering if u could tell me
I agree very sad but very good. I’m not sure why you’ve chose black magic blanket. It sounds a bit dark and evil. I’m sorry but the rest was really good!
there really good. but a little sad but i know that poems are written best when you write them with the emotions your feeling. i hope that made sense =]
really good, but kinda depressing
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