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What do you think of my poem?
Hello, another poem here, and it’s called “Discovery.” Please tell me what you think of it, be it good or bad, and please be as detailed as possible. What I am most interested in is how it makes you feel, what images it brings to mind, and impressions you’re left with.
Love when I hear my spine crack As you put your arms around me.
Love when I’m facedown in the mud With your palm on the back of my neck.
God, it’s wonderful. I’ve got a scalpel in my bag And you’re probably a little familiar with human anatomy Start small, but open me up wide You can probably learn at least A little something By peeking around my insides
I’ve got a map written on the underside of my skin– It’s in a language I’ve forgotten. Tell me where I‘m from, lover.
I really like that it kind of makes me think of how difficult it is to love that you have to get under someones skin first and look past the outside thats just me though
bro thats so good work .i relly like it as im thinkin bout the words its making me wonder how love relly is
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