What do you think of my poem???

To stare into the eyes of a loved one Is to stare into your very own soul From a different view But this makes it harder to find your loved ones For others can be blind But most of the time There eyes are blocked By their own views Wich means you must change your loved ones For THEM to see clearly into YOUR heart

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Answer #1

well thats good but is it like 4 school because if it is than like its kina personalll but besides that its really good

Answer #2

what inspired the poem was some people in my family and poeple who I feel have to change to make them see

and if you dont think I wrote it, I swear to god I did! I was just scared to see what people would think

Answer #3

thats deep…love it =]

Answer #4

sob haha..no just playin’ its extremely good! what inspired that poem?

Answer #5

it’s a very interesting unique poem I like it :)

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