What do you think of my poem?

that was great really descriptive and you made it seem like the words came alive well any way great poem

Great poem! It’s so sweet I really like it :)

I like it :)

Thanks :) I appreciate that a lot! Oh and thanks for anyone else who posts an answer :) good or bad I’ll take it as a compliment :)

love love love it!

I love it this is sooo romantic and sweet you have talent

sweet :)

I love it!You really have some talent!!!

Absolutely beautiful (: your a great writer. Please, write more…

Well done Mig

it is amazing!!!

aww its awesome(:

oh wow that was amazing!!! great loved it!!!

Awww!! That’s sweet :)

Nice Job! Two thumbs way way up :)

Very beautiful and high-quality, strangely it slightly resembles when I write, maybe it is the result of natural writing, do try to have it published, and also do not neglect to learn the Castellano which is the version you speak if I am not mistaken. You could also in the latter become a poet and even yet another great writer!

Bleh is obviously suffering from a case of immaturity that is causing him/her to find humor in deep thought. My guess is that the poem just went far over his/her head and he/she is trying to compensate by making a mockery out of good work. Unfortunately for bleh, he/she just made himself/herself look like a dumbass, rather than a humorous additive.

As for the poem, Brian mentioned a lack of criticism. ‘’My affection for her flowing ever so slowly caressing her lips’’ There needs to be a comma after slowly to separate the two dependent clauses. I also believe that nevermore is all one word, as quoth the raven :) Haha.

Other than that, solid use of metaphorical verbiage. The use of “permeates’’ is my favorite :) You write a lot like my husband actually. He uses amour propre a lot, just to throw that out there. Most of his verbs can’t be literally translated in context. I’m getting off topic though. Good job Mig :)

That was really really good! wow like I love reading and writing poems but literally I’ve never read one quite like that. it was very good. :)

for some reason this made laugh so hard xDD at first I was like what! then I was just cracking up I dunno maybe I’m to immature to read poems like this one lmafao xD

Wow I love it, if you had a DA account I would SO love to read more!

ha, and I’m going to be the famous writer? hmm, you’ll be famous before me hahaha, you’re that good (:

really intense wow =D hmm sometimes I like simpler poems than this one but besides that I do like this a lot ! way more impressive than somehing I could write :]