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What do you think about this poem?
Stuck Between Two
My head is spinning My thoughts are wack I just wanna leave I’m getting ready to pack
This house is obnoxious Beyond what I can handle Here, I feel like a no one Like a burnt out candle
I don’t know what to think I don’t know what to do The only reason I stay Is because of you
If I leave home I don’t get to see you It would be the end of us I don’t think I can handle that too
I’m stuck in the middle Of wanting to leave, and stay It’s as if I’m stuck in the middle Of a sunny and rainy day
You are my life now But this place really hurts I wish I had a clear view of this I wish I could kick up the dirt
But I guess I pick you Because to me, it’s easy Because when I’m not with you I feel queasy
You mean the world to me Even more then my music I know it sounds impossible But I love you more then my acoustic
Yes, music is like the air that fills my loungs And I won’t give it up without a fight And with that fight, I’ll fight till death Until I see that light, so bright
Now, just think that though What I just said Think about it hard Use your head
Understand that I love music More then I love life But then understand that I love you More then I love music
So, with that said To make it official, I pick you I could never leave your side And I hope you feel the same way too
Reasonable and applaudable.
It’s really nice :)
Interesting I like it =)
ok, I hope that is not you’re first because that is really good and I think you should continue writing :P
I think it is really gud!
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