What do you think of my poem?

When your gone I feel with you. I feel like your here When your gone we’re connected. I sit here and feel your soul flow through my body. I feel the warmth of your smile light up my whole world,we’re connected. I feel the sparkle of your eyes trickle through my body and onto my face. As I cry the bitter-sweet tears for you. We’re connected. Sciene can’t explain what happens to us. When your gone my heart sets on fire with the rage from how you feel. It’s like we’re one. We’re connected!

Answer #1

omg, it’s such a sweet poem. “…science can’t explain what happens to us…” that’s how I feel about my crush!

Answer #2

awww… I love it! how sweet.. who are you talkin bout??

Answer #3

I like it… now can you help me come up with one??

Answer #4

I really like it c(:

Answer #5

It’s amazing! You’re really talented! you should insert it into a contest! Chec your grammer and spelling first, but it’s REALLY good! What’s the story behind it?

Answer #6

I like it I love how you keep using were connected

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