what do you think bout my poems?

I like 2 write poems. here are a few of them. tell me what you think and tell me tha truth,please.

  Sky

Up in the sky, I see many things, birds and clouds appear, on bright sunny days, you see the suns rays, and the beautiful kite at play


Slumber Parties Slumber parties are fun, there’s so much to do, pillow fights, and popcorn,too, scary movies, make-up disasters, and fun things for me and you


 Winter

Winter is my favorite season, Love sent with all the greetings, Presents sent with gentle care, lots of snow everywhere, My favorite part is December 25th, When Jesus was born, He saves us all from our sins, and glories us all within.


A Girl A girl is unique, always a beauty-queen, they all have there own technique, most of them wear jeans, but most of all, a girl is not perfect, they have there ups and there downs, but,they always seem to turn them around, a girl is special.

Answer #1

hey my crush’s name is sonny too lol just thought I could pop that in. but newayz yur poems are great could you come up with one for ‘night’. your really good I liked all of them too especially the sunny wun and winter because its also my fav season lol kool keep it up!

Answer #2

aww they’re all so short but sweet and really cute! I love each one! - ahahaha… they remind me of Hallmark cards for some reason! (: ehehehe… I can deffinetly see these pomes as card greetings =]

Answer #3

Oh my goodness, your poems are cute :)

Answer #4

oh I love poems and yours are so sweet. no poem is bad. how can they be when they come from your heart. keep it up:)

Answer #5

wow I LOVE them. they make me happy :) and they have a catchy rythum. good job girl!!! dont ever give up :)

Answer #6

I liked all of them… I liked the one with sunny the most cause my crush’s name is Sonny. ^_^

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