Tell me what you think

I enjoy writing and I want to know what other people think.

She is a ride or die chick A girl who has my back A homie for life And without her I would lack

Aloud and proud asian Who ain’t afraid to fight She can be quite ghetto Even though she’s half white

She works hard for a living And herself she can carry My homegirl forever She calls herself mary

Answer #1

You’ve got potential - try not to trap yourself into rhyming though. Good writing does not have to rhyme.

Not bad at all.

Answer #2

likes :)

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