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How should I start off my song?

Well I really wanna write a song about a girl liking a guy, but he doesn’t know. I’ve written songs before, but I really need helpp just starting. If you could give me a first verse to work off of, that’d be great(: It can be anything at all and I can try to work off it. Thanks so muchh in advancee xoxo

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Answer #1

Verse1 I stand there in the dark, Wondering where’s the light, You seem to notice me, But now I think its all in my mind, Everytime I look at you I get butterflies, While you dont even know I exist, You see me after class, but all I see is a fist, Deep in my heart buried is a pluse,

… I don’t know I can’t think of anything else lemme know if this helped

Answer #2

verse 1: I see you walk past me everyday I just stand there..and stare do you even know that I exsist do you even know my name do you do you really know me you always have those dreams about the one you love or at least the one you think you love you could have million heart aches before you find the one the one you can love thanks p.s. just because im a 10 year old doesnt mean I dont have talent thanks for the oppertunity I hope you like it xoxoxo

Answer #3

I think about you day and night do you even know im alive ? WHat I’d do to make you look twice Its like a roll of the dice I wish id get my chance to have just one dance or a moment of your time not just some pick up line

just came up with that off the top of my head. I hope it helped. If you need any more help just hit me up, I love writing songs =]

Answer #4

If there was a prize for drivel I know the gold and silver medallists already. How about ‘I really wanna do him how can I tell him? My horn is honking like a golden sedan, oh why can’t I make him my man?’ Now that is genius if I say so myself.

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