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Poem or song?
I wrote something that started as a poem but kinda developed into a song…tell me if I should scratch the song part and re write it into a poem or if its fine how it is, and do you like it…
That’s what love’s about
Now that it’s all said and done I miss the times when we were young Your sweet voice no longer there Our laughter hangs in the air
Now the day feels so long All the love we had is gone And in this cinderella story The slipper shattered in its glory
What we had was frozen ice Dropped from high It shattered nice And with the pieces left behind The truth was not that hard to find And with the time that slowed us by I realize now, that you and I We’re just not working out, I guess that’s what love’s about
Oh yeah, I guess that’s what loves about Finding things, and finding out Sometimes you’re just not right Finding gray in black and white Finding halves of broken hearts Finding trust that feel apart Finding all that used to be I guess that’s what love is to me
I guess when its all said and done I’ll find my heart and make a run Cause in this battle no one won We live to tell and tell again That every start comes from an end And sometimes finding out, Is what love is all about
Oh, I guess that’s what loves about Finding things, and finding out Sometimes you’re just not right Finding gray in black and white Finding halves of broken hearts Finding trust that feel apart Finding all that used to be I guess that’s what love is to me
What we were, Is in the past, It seemed to end Just to damn fast But what we had just wasn’t good So alone we both stood But I guess that’s how it went When love fails you don’t repent Cause sometimes finding out Is what love is all about
Oh, I guess that’s what loves about Finding things, and finding out Sometimes you’re just not right Finding gray in black and white Finding halves of broken hearts Finding trust that feel apart Finding all that used to be I guess that’s what love is to me
Now that it’s all said and done I miss the times when we were young Your sweet voice no longer there Our laughter hangs in the air
Now the day feels so long All the love we had is gone And in this cinderella story The slipper shattered in its glory
What we had was frozen ice Dropped from high It shattered nice And with the pieces left behind The truth was not that hard to find And with the time that slowed us by I realize now, that you and I We’re just not working out, I guess that’s what love’s about
I think it should be a song. that was beautiful. you’re very talented. :D
its fine just the way it is :) I feel songs or poems should be kept the way they are,…
do both. but you know, its your work. so you should be the one to decide how/if it’s published.
^_^ This is so…stunning & pleasant!!
I really like how you put it. Why not…make it into a poem. & a song? Me…I like to read & write poetry…& am not much of a singer…so…I say poem. But…I’m sure it’d make an excellent song as well. So both!
:D
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