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I I feel so alone And I need you here tonight
Missin those little things you do Those things you did to comfort me I miss your soft touch I feel alonemiss your beautiful face Cant stop thinkin Wont stop thinking Bout what I coulda done different Come back to me Why wont you come back to me
I’m begging you please come back to me She meant nothing to me You mean everything to me

And I neeed you here tonight And I neeed to see your smile
And I need to see you And I need to hear you
So please Come back to me Back to me Back to me

Like I wrote it but I know it sucks and I dont care if somone uses it like I dont want them to but if they do oh well how bad is this for my first song it isnt finished either

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Answer #1

ya I think maybe if I practice I might get good enuff to umm write them for a job that would be cool people say I have a good imagination but im not a good writer so

Answer #2

realy hmmm my family says it sucks and I shouldnt write

Answer #3

I think it’s a good song.

Answer #4

aww I like it!!!(:

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